I made this in some of my free time but im fairly new to graphix design so if you guys could tell me what you think or give me some pointers i would be greatfull thank you

That is some very good work, Ive been noticing for awhile.

The over all design is great, I thin kif you make the main render a little lighter.  Just to help it pop out or stand out a little more.

Past that I love it, great focus.

hows this?

Oh much better.

What program are you using for your images?

photoshop cs5.1 extended